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Starsight MAG

November 26, 2023
By Fortissimoh SILVER, Peachtree City, Georgia
Fortissimoh SILVER, Peachtree City, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"Show me your thorns and I'll show you hands ready to bleed." -Anon.


Last night I tried to herd the stars,

But they were pooled in your gaze

As specks of macadamia

In a vast vanilla lake.

 

You lay on Venus' breast

And breathe stardust through your nose.

And you, with a licorice tongue,

Become a daughter of the cosmos. 


The author's comments:

A piece about two lovers under the stars.


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on Dec. 4 2023 at 7:53 am
SunnySkies GOLD, Cleveland, Tennessee
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Cheer up my brother live in the sunshine, we'll understand it, all by and by.

Btw I like writing poems and stories too! (I read your profile)

on Dec. 4 2023 at 7:52 am
SunnySkies GOLD, Cleveland, Tennessee
19 articles 3 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
Cheer up my brother live in the sunshine, we'll understand it, all by and by.

Ah- yes, metaphors, we all love those... :D

( I like the poem though )